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SAO: Undine OC

Published: Dec 28, 2012

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Pues e aqui mi personaje de ALO de Sword Art Online, una undine que en toda la serie solo aprece una xD
no se porque me gusta mucho como a quedado, me mate haciendola ya que cuando empece era horrible y la cambie un monton de veces y este es el resultado :3
las alas me dieron mucho la lata pero al final quedaron bien

no tiene nombre xDD

espero que os guste

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TheLegendofDerpy

Dec 28, 2012

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Just to start off: I am not artist, not in the sense of actually drawing. People don't think I can critique because of this, but I believe I have the same eyes as any other person and give you some advice. It's just a pre-warning.

The position she is in is lovely, and the shading is nice. What's bothering me is her chest area: it doesn't really look attached to her! The belt looks a little odd as well, however that could be just me being picky. However, I love the facial expression, and I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Good job!