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SAO: Undine OC by xflorinax SAO: Undine OC by xflorinax
Pues e aqui mi personaje de ALO de Sword Art Online, una undine que en toda la serie solo aprece una xD
no se porque me gusta mucho como a quedado, me mate haciendola ya que cuando empece era horrible y la cambie un monton de veces y este es el resultado :3
las alas me dieron mucho la lata pero al final quedaron bien :D
no tiene nombre xDD

espero que os guste :heart:
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Just to start off: I am not artist, not in the sense of actually drawing. People don't think I can critique because of this, but I believe I have the same eyes as any other person and give you some advice. It's just a pre-warning.

The position she is in is lovely, and the shading is nice. What's bothering me is her chest area: it doesn't really look attached to her! The belt looks a little odd as well, however that could be just me being picky. However, I love the facial expression, and I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Good job!
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xHaniMilkshakex Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love her dresssss!!!
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xflorinax Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much, I'm glad you like! :iconawplz:
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xHaniMilkshakex Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome!! :D
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LyNuth Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Te quedó muy bien *-* Valió la pena el esfuerzo, sobre todo en las alas! Me gusta que es armonioso con el fondo pero sin perderse. Lo unico que quiza no me convence son las piernas, pero no es algo demasiado notorio. ¡Me encanta SAO! Y acabo de ver el final del anime, debo leer las novelas que se que siguen ;3
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xflorinax Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me alegra que te guste x3
yo las piernas tambien se las veo un poco raras y se las cambie un monton de veces pero no conseguia que quedasen bien y al final se quedaron asi que almenos estan un poco mas decentes para la vista xDD
En las novelas salen un monton de personajes que en el anime no llegaron a salir :)
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LyNuth Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
:D

Esas cosas se irán corrigiendo con el tiempo, así que no hay de que preocuparse mientras sigas dibujando!

No sabía eso~ salen otros personajes desde el principio? Entonces debería leer todo :D
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Haru-Shonta Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Mola mucho! *_*
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xflorinax Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
muchas gracias :iconaawplz:
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Miau-nya Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oye, pues si todas siguen ese patrón deberían salir más xDDDD

La tuya se ve monisima c:
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xflorinax Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gracias :DD
yo creo que se merecian salir más ò.o
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